Elements of a Short
Story
SETTING -- The time and location in
which a story takes place is called the setting. For some stories the
setting is very important, while for others it is not. There are several
aspects of a story's setting to consider when examining how setting contributes
to a story (some, or all, may be present in a story):
a) place -
geographical location. Where is the action of the story taking place?
b) time - When is the
story taking place? (historical period, time of day, year, etc)
c) weather conditions - Is
it rainy, sunny, stormy, etc?
d) social conditions -
What is the daily life of the character's like? Does the story contain local
colour (writing that focuses on the speech, dress, mannerisms, customs, etc. of
a particular place)?
e) mood or atmosphere -
What feeling is created at the beginning of the story? Is it bright and
cheerful or dark and frightening?
PLOT -- The
plot is how the author arranges events to develop his basic idea; It is
the sequence of events in a story or play. The plot is a planned, logical
series of events having a beginning, middle, and end. The short story
usually has one plot so it can be read in one sitting. There are five
essential parts of plot:
a) Introduction -
The beginning of the story where the characters and the setting is revealed.
b)
Rising Action - This is where
the events in the story become complicated and the conflict in the story is
revealed (events between the introduction and climax).
c)
Climax - This is the highest
point of interest and the turning point of the story. The reader wonders
what will happen next; will the conflict be resolved or not?
d)
Falling action - The events and
complications begin to resolve themselves. The reader knows what has
happened next and if the conflict was resolved or not (events between climax
and denouement).
e)
Resolution - This is the final
outcome or untangling of events in the story.
It is helpful to consider climax as a three-fold phenomenon: 1) the
main character receives new information 2) accepts this information
(realizes it but does not necessarily agree with it) 3) acts on this
information (makes a choice that will determine whether or not he/she gains his
objective).
CONFLICT--
Conflict is essential to plot. Without conflict there is no plot.
It is the opposition of forces which ties one incident to another and makes the
plot move. Conflict is not merely limited to open arguments, rather it is
any form of opposition that faces the main character. Within a short story
there may be only one central struggle, or there may be one dominant struggle
with many minor ones.
There are two types of conflict:
1) External - A struggle
with a force outside one's self.
a) Man vs. Man - The leading
character struggles with his physical strength against other men, forces of nature, or animals.
b) Man vs. Nature or
Circumstances - The leading character struggles against fate, or the circumstances of life facing him/her.
c)
Man vs. Society (social) - The
leading character struggles against ideas, practices, or customs of other people.
2) Internal
- A struggle within one's self; a person must make some decision, overcome
pain, quiet their temper, resist an urge, etc.
a) Man vs. Himself/Herself
(psychological) - The leading character struggles with himself/herself; with his/her own soul, ideas
of right or wrong, physical limitations, choices, etc.
CHARACTER
-- There are two meanings for the word character:
1) The person in a work of fiction.
2) The characteristics of a person.
Persons in a work of fiction - Antagonist and Protagonist
Short stories use few characters. One character is clearly central to the
story with all major events having some importance to this character - he/she
is the PROTAGONIST. The opposer of the main character is called the
ANTAGONIST. If this is not a person or people, it is
called the ANTAGONISTIC FORCE.
The Characteristics of a Person -
In order for a story to seem real to the reader its characters must seem
real. Characterization is the information the author gives the reader
about the characters themselves. The author may reveal a character in
several ways:
a) his/her physical appearance
b) what he/she says, thinks, feels and dreams
c) what he/she does or does not do and
why.
d) what others say about him/her and how others react to him/her
Characters
are convincing if they are: consistent, motivated, and life-like
(resemble real people)
Characters...
1. Individual - round,
many sided and complex personalities.
2. Developing -
dynamic, many sided personalities that change, for better or worse, by the
end of the story.
3. Static - Stereotype,
have one or two characteristics that never change and are emphasized e.g.
brilliant detective, drunk, scrooge, cruel stepmother, etc.
POINT OF VIEW
Point
of view, or p.o.v., is defined as the angle from which the story is told.
1.
Innocent Eye - The story
is told through the eyes of a child (his/her judgment being different from that
of an adult) .
2.
Stream of Consciousness -
The story is told so that the reader feels as if they are inside the head of one
character and knows all their thoughts and reactions.
3.
First Person - The story
is told by the protagonist or one of the characters who interacts closely
with the protagonist or other characters (using pronouns I, me, we, etc).
The reader sees the story through this person's eyes as he/she experiences it
and only knows what he/she knows or feels.
4.
Third person Omniscient- The author can narrate
the story using the omniscient point of view. He can move from character
to character, event to event, having free access to the thoughts, feelings and
motivations of his characters and he introduces information where and when he
chooses. There are two main types of omniscient point of view:
a)
Third person Omniscient Limited
- The author tells the story in third person (using pronouns they, she, he, it,
etc). We know only what the character knows and what the author allows
him/her to tell us. We can see the thoughts and feelings of characters if the
author chooses to reveal them to us.
b)
Omniscient Objective -
The author tells the story in the third person. It appears as though a
camera is following the characters, going anywhere, and recording only what is
seen and heard. There is no comment on the characters or their thoughts.
No interpretations are offered. The reader is placed in the position of
spectator without the author there to explain. The reader has to
interpret events on his own.
THEME -- The theme in a piece of
fiction is its controlling idea or its central insight. It is the author's
underlying meaning or main idea that he is trying to convey. The theme
may be the author's thoughts about a topic or view of human nature. The
title of the short story usually points to what the writer is saying and he may
use various figures of speech to emphasize his theme, such as: symbol,
allusion, simile, metaphor, hyperbole, or irony.
Some
simple examples of common themes from literature, TV, and film are:
- things are not always as they appear to be
- Love is blind
- Believe in yourself
- People are afraid of change
- Don't judge a book by its cover